Thanks. I've updated the description because it isn't quite accurate. His hands aren't "jammed" in his pockets the way I envisioned it and he really isn't "hunched" over. I wrote the description before I created the scene for the photo. Below is the previous description, which do you like better?
He walked hunched over, hands jammed in his pockets. His eyes were always on the ground,refusing to meet the eyes of passersby. If he had had a tail, it would have curled between his legs.
That's a good one. I like how your hands are actually in your pockets.
ReplyDeleteThanks. I've updated the description because it isn't quite accurate. His hands aren't "jammed" in his pockets the way I envisioned it and he really isn't "hunched" over. I wrote the description before I created the scene for the photo. Below is the previous description, which do you like better?
ReplyDeleteHe walked hunched over, hands jammed in his pockets. His eyes were always on the ground,refusing to meet the eyes of passersby. If he had had a tail, it would have curled between his legs.